3WW CXLIV

2009 July 1
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by Mark

For Cubs fans, I offer this haiku

Another collapse
Not so sweet for Cubs fans
Yearn (again) for next year

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My Now and Then

Blowing snow and frost
Covered windows keep
Me in the warmth by the
Fire sipping hot chocolate
Thoughts of summer or
Late spring fill me.  A
Longing for the freedom
of warmer times, fresh sweet
Corn roasting on the grill
The sound of the bonfire
As the husks of what used
to be trees collapse into
a Flurry of rising sparks
Even as the fire dies down

I succumb and yearn
for the days of my long ago
Where barefoot days and
mud and Mosquito bites
were just part and parcel
of Summer life.

I turn from the dismal scene
and my silly dreams
of I can’t go back there, to
go and awaken my own
Here and Now.  Maybe to
Play.  In the snow.

For 3WW

17 Responses leave one →
  1. 2009 July 1

    i love summer.

    Santa makes winter ok too…lol!

    • 2009 July 1

      I enjoy aspects of all four seasons. But I think I like autumn best.

      And yes, Santa does make Winter fun!

  2. 2009 July 1

    “My Now and Then” is filled with such great lines. Thanks for sharing.

    Ritual

    • 2009 July 1

      You are welcome.

      Thanks for providing the wonderful and fun prompts every week. Also, thanks for the nice thoughts!

  3. 2009 July 1
    angie permalink

    lovely poem, Mark. would look so nice in some sort of community anthology, maybe one with a ‘nature’ theme…hmmmm. wonder where you could find such a place. if only you knew someone who could squeeze you in at the last minute…

    (like the ‘collapse’ applied to baseball, too. being from cincinnati, I understand that all too well!!)

    • 2009 July 1

      If you figure who that somebody could be, let me know. :-P

      Being a Reds fan must be a trial…

      Glad you liked the poem, Angie

  4. 2009 July 1

    Beautifully written. I often complain about winter til the humidity begins rising and then wish for cooler air once again.

    • 2009 July 1

      I’m convinced that we all like what we don’t have at present.

      That’s the joy of different seasons. You learn to appreciate parts of all of them.

  5. 2009 July 1

    Nicely done. In my experience we always yearn for the opposite season in the middle of the present one.

  6. 2009 July 1

    The Cubs haiku was very clever…and the second poem truly moved me with its reminiscent feel.

  7. 2009 July 2

    Love them both!

    The details of corn and trees are great1

  8. 2009 July 2

    Nice work, all around. I’m a summer person with never a yearn for winter, never. Enjoyed your post!

  9. 2009 July 2

    Oh what summer USED to be… so sweet a memory. Thank you for bringing it back to me.

  10. 2009 July 2

    Nice one……

  11. 2009 July 2

    Loved the images you drew of the seasons ! even if they were dreams :)

  12. 2009 July 4

    Yeah, I grew up a Red Sox fan, so I get it. But those Cubs…

  13. 2009 July 8
    camtodd1846 permalink

    Love the second one.

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